My mind yearns to decipher. It aches to know. To uproot veins and ripples at the sound of our beating entanglement. I think our love is geometric and will remain as such. You and I are parallel; no matter how close we get we’ll never intersect. And as you took another drag, and breathed out rhythms like the smoke, I felt my heart turning as black as your lungs.
I knew I fell in love with an explosion. It burned the heavens and ignited the night. It swallowed my heart and left marks on my chest. It happened in a flash; then fizzled out. I kissed each spark, simply because I loved the one who was burning.
You made me want something a little more potent than caffeine, a little less than cocaine. And I haven’t been able to find something like you, because goddamn, you’re one dazzling firework. A firework that has no match. The one that lights up the night sky. The one that makes the moon look a little less magical. The darkness look a little more welcoming.
You’re dark, eerie, summoning the night. You’re a turbulent storm, a relentless wind. Beckoning the world, taunting us to jump. Wanting us to commit a nocturnal crime.
~Ritika
Loved your language Ritz. Especially the geometrical love stuff. Write more and share more.
Much love,
Adhi.
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Thank you so much, Adhi:) Always great hearing from you!
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Thanks Ritz. I think Ritz is fine. 😝
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Ritz is great, actually 😀
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😛
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Beautiful, as always. You phrase things in such a catchy way. A powerful way. “You’re a turbulent storm, a relentless wind…” perfect analogies.
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It feels great when someone actually ‘reads’ the post and tells me what they like about it. It gives me the motivation to go on. Thank you so much!:)
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You are very welcome. Don’t ever stop writing. You have a gift. 🙂
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Wonderful imagery evoked
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Love that can never be. Those are the bloody ones that haunt the dreams. I really enjoyed reading this piece, it brought to life feelings I know all to well. Thank you for sharing
it with us.
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Phenomenal.
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Profound writing 🙂
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Thank you:)
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No matter how close we are, we’ll never intersect. Holy hell that’s a brilliant line! This is wonderful, Ritika! 😉
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Thank you so very much:)
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Your words always have some force in them. Always look forward to more from you.Right from where you start till the words end, they keep one glued, you have the art.
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